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September 11th, 2004, 04:56 PM
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The two fighters grappled momentarily with one another trying to gain a grip and then broke, circling each other. Then Brittany swung a right hook which Shanna ducked, retaliating with a jab, which Brittany blocked. Shanna swung another right cross towards Brittany's hip which glanced off, my champion still bent low from her original defensive move. Shanna began to stand up but as she did, Brittany executed a devastating move. She faked a left uppercut which caught Shanna's attention as she went to stand and then slammed an overhead right pefrectly into Shanna's face. Shanna had been hit numerous times in her life, and I didn't think much of it, but the punch connected and Shanna was laid out flat--motionless.
I was stunned. Brittany was in agony--her hand had hit the top of Shanna's head and it was hurt. She was pacing around the room shaking her hand, with tears almost in her eyes. Robert looked at me. "That was quick." he said.
I was too dumbfounded to say anything.
"You done, bitch?" I heard Brittany say.
I suppose Shanna was awake. I couldn't hear what she said.
Brittany shook her head in as if in disgust and began to walk over to Shanna, who was stirring. I presumed she had awakened and wasn't done fighting. I wanted her to be though--obviously Brittany packed a good punch--or at least a lucky one and there was no way Shanna would be on her game for the next several minutes.
Shanna's ass was in the air, on her knees as her upper body remained on the floor, when Brittany went to resume her conquest.
Robert interrupted, "It's over, she was knocked out." he said into the microphone.
"No it's not!!" the two fighters yelled almost simultaneously.
Robert looked at me with raised eyebrows...I nodded agreement.
"Go ahead" he said into the mike... but they already had. Brittany slammed her foot into Shanna's back and then backed away, letting Shanna get to her hands and knees--still obviously dazed. Shanna was moving slow and Brittany moved up to her and slammed several unprotected kicks into Shanna's left flank and tits. Shanna's body shook and she rolled onto her right side, clutching her wounded body. I could see the haze in her eyes...
Brittany moved behind her, grabbing her hair.
I don't think Brittany actually knew what to expect from Shanna, but it certainly wasn't what happened. I think Brittany thought Shanna was more dazed because she allowed Shanna unhindered access to her body as she dragged my girl to her feet. Shann slammed a fist squarely into Brittany's crotch--a weak punch, but effective because of where it was placed. Brittany yelped "Bitch!" and released her hold on Shanna, who stumbled backwards and nearly fell down again. Brittany was only slowed for a minute as she stalked after Shanna and began picking her apart with kicks and punches. I was cringing. Shanna's head flew from side to side and her body leaped as it was pummeled by Brittany's onslaught. I had seen one-sided fights before, but I had never seen Shanna on the receiving end of one like this. Her nose and mouth were bloody. I knew she was still out on her feet.
I leaned over to Robert, "End it." I said.
He laughed. "I can't, " he said, "Only they can. That was the rule."
"Yeah, but she's knocked out.." I persisted.
"Not technically." he said, "Sorry."
I was staring at him, frustrated, when we heard a loud thump. It drew our attention back to the fight.
We both turned. Brittany had slammed Shanna face first into the glass wall in front of us. Shanna's bloody and dazed face was contorted in pain. Her big tits were flattened humiliatingly against the glass and the rest of her naked body was pinned against the wall. Brittany was behind her, unaffected by the fight except for the fact that she glistened with a sheen of sweat and she was breathing a bit hard.
She slammed punches into Shanna's back--I am sure into her kidneys as each one elicited a wail from Shanna and caused her face to contort into an even more severe mask of pain...
Any lesser woman would have been sobbing at this brutal, one-sided fight. I was still shocked at how much Brittany was dominating Shanna but couldn't help but think it was a result of that early, lucky punch.
Brittany ceased her punching for a moment and I cringed as I thought what could be next. She moved closer to Shanna, her body pressed against her. I looked at robert who was smirking--he obviously knew what was coming. Brittany whispered something into Shanna's ear that we couldn't hear and Shanna's eyes went wide as she shook her head and wailed. Initially, I was focused on Shanna's face, but then I noticed her body jerking uncontrollably, and her wailing increasing with each motion. I looked at Brittany and realized that she was doing something to elicit each convulsion. Then I saw through the glass, that Brittany had buried her hand into Shanna's crotch and had slid her middle finger deep into her snatch...she was jerking up on her hand every few seconds to elicit the pain in Shanna's embattled body...
Shanna was done for. Or so I thought. Then, she slammed her elbow into Brittany's face. It couldn't have been a more perfect shot. We could hear the snap as Brittany's nose broke and blood gushed out.
Brittany's voice, now very nasal, wailed as she stumbled back, clutching her face. Shanna slid down the glass, not ready to take advantage of her situation.
It was only then that I heard, very quietly, another voice from behind me in the dark, "Yesss. This should get good." is what was said.
I turned and saw the most gorgeous woman I had ever laid eyes on sitting behind me she wore a tank top and a pair of bike shorts and I don't know how I noticed, but I saw her wedding band. "I'm the wife" she said. "Brittany's the girlfriend." she finished. I looked at Robert, this time with my eyebrows raised.
He just smiled. Shanna had gotten to her feet.
And I really had no idea where this was going......
to be continued...
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September 11th, 2004, 05:44 PM
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HB Forum Owner
WTF?!?!?! Never saw that coming... LOVED it tho, Great work!!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
MikeJV
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September 11th, 2004, 06:34 PM
#3
Inactive Member
Getting interesting with a nice twist! Can't help wonder what's cumming next! ... :-)
Caio!
Jessie & Emma
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September 11th, 2004, 07:14 PM
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Senior Hostboard Member
I wish I could post a dozen thumbs up for this one! Yes, this twist is so hot! Could the wife be fronting the money for all these opponents? Or did she lose to Britanny and now is trying to wear her down with Shanna, so as to finish her off in revenge. The possibilities are endless! Damn this is too good. :-)
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